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CELPIP Writing Samples & Model Answers

Examiner-style model answers for Task 1 (Email) and Task 2 (Survey), plus the word-count targets, scoring rules, and prompt-by-prompt breakdowns that separate CLB 7 from CLB 9+.

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Task 1: Email CLB 10 183 words Complaint

Damaged Furniture Complaint

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Dear Customer Service Team, I am sending this email to express my dissatisfaction with a recent purchase I made at your store. On March 15th, I ordered a walnut dining table (Order #45829) which was delivered yesterday. Unfortunately, upon inspection, I discovered that the table surface has a significant scratch running approximately 30 centimeters along the center, and one of the legs appears to be slightly bent, causing the table to wobble noticeably. The table was purchased for $899.99 and was intended for a family gathering this weekend. Given the extent of the damage, I am quite disappointed with the condition in which the product arrived. I would like to request a full replacement to be delivered as soon as possible, or alternatively, a complete refund to my original payment method. I have attached photographs of the damage for your reference. Please let me know how you intend to resolve this matter at your earliest convenience. I can be reached at the phone number or email address on file. I would be grateful for your prompt attention to this issue. Sincerely, Daniel Okafor

Word count: 183 / Target: 150–200 words

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You recently bought a piece of furniture that was damaged during delivery. Write an email to the customer service department.

  • • Describe the item you purchased in detail.
  • • Explain the nature of the damage clearly.
  • • State what solution you expect from the company.
Task 1: Email CLB 10 172 words Complaint

Cancelled Photography Workshop

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Dear Community Center Manager, I would like to contact you to express my strong disappointment regarding the sudden cancellation of the Weekend Photography Workshop (Course #302) scheduled for this Saturday, October 14th. I received an automated email notification yesterday evening stating that the course was cancelled due to low enrollment. I was highly anticipating this workshop as I purchased a new camera specifically for it and rearranged my busy work schedule to free up the weekend. Because of this late notice, I was unable to plan alternative activities or sign up for another class at a different facility. Since the cancellation was completely beyond my control, I expect a full refund of my $120 registration fee credited back to my original visa card. Additionally, given the inconvenience and last-minute notification, I would appreciate receiving a discount voucher or a priority credit that can be applied to future creative arts workshops at your center. Thank you for your time and attention to this matter. I look forward to your response. Sincerely, Liam O'Connor

Word count: 172 / Target: 150–200 words

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You recently registered for a weekend photography workshop at the local community center, but the center cancelled it at the last minute due to low enrollment. Write an email to the community center manager.

  • • Explain your disappointment and why you were looking forward to the workshop.
  • • Detail the inconvenience the sudden cancellation caused you.
  • • State what action or compensation you expect from the community center (e.g., a refund or a credit for future classes).
Task 1: Email CLB 10 166 words Complaint

Hotel Service Complaint

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Dear Hotel Manager, I am contacting your office to express my strong disappointment regarding my recent stay at your hotel from June 10th to June 12th. I was registered in Room 304 under the reservation name David Chen. Unfortunately, the cleanliness of the room was completely unacceptable. Upon arrival, I found dusty surfaces, trash under the bed from the previous guest, and stained towels in the bathroom. Furthermore, when I called the front desk to request clean towels, the staff member was extremely dismissive and rude, stating that housekeeping had already gone home for the day. As a frequent traveler and a member of your loyalty program, I expected a much higher standard of customer service and cleanliness. Due to these issues, my stay was highly uncomfortable. I request a full refund for the cost of my room, as well as an assurance that housekeeping standards will be reviewed. I look forward to your prompt response and a satisfactory resolution to this matter. Sincerely, David Chen

Word count: 166 / Target: 150–200 words

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You recently stayed at a hotel and were extremely unsatisfied with the service and the cleanliness of your room. Write an email to the hotel manager.

  • • Provide the details of your stay (dates and room number).
  • • Describe the specific issues with the cleanliness and service.
  • • State what compensation or action you expect from the hotel.
Task 1: Email CLB 10 183 words Complaint

Restaurant Experience Complaint

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Dear Restaurant Manager, I am contacting your office to express my disappointment regarding my visit to your establishment last Friday evening. I chose your restaurant to celebrate my best friend's birthday, expecting a memorable and enjoyable night based on the positive reviews I had read. Unfortunately, our experience fell far short of expectations. To start, despite having a reservation for 7:30 PM, we were not seated until after 8:15 PM, with no apology offered. Once seated, it took another thirty minutes for our drink orders to be taken. When the main courses finally arrived, two of the dishes were served cold, and my friend's steak, which was ordered medium-rare, was completely overcooked. Given the special occasion, this level of service and food quality was highly unacceptable. I strongly suggest that you speak with your front-of-house staff about managing reservations more effectively and address the quality control issues in the kitchen. I would also appreciate a partial refund or a voucher to compensate for this disappointing experience. I look forward to hearing your response and seeing how you address these concerns. Sincerely, Hassan Mahmoud

Word count: 183 / Target: 150–200 words

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You recently visited a new local restaurant to celebrate a friend's birthday, but the experience was highly disappointing. Write an email to the restaurant manager.

  • • Explain the reason for your visit.
  • • Describe the specific problems you encountered (e.g., service, food quality).
  • • Suggest what the manager should do to resolve the situation.
Task 1: Email CLB 10 173 words Request

Training Conference Sponsorship Request

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CLB 10
Dear Ms. Robinson, I would like to contact you to formally request approval to attend the Canadian Project Management Summit scheduled for November 14th to 16th in Toronto. As our department prepares to implement Agile workflows across all upcoming client deliverables, this three-day conference offers critical sessions directly applicable to our Q1 objectives. Attending this event will allow me to participate in specialized workshops on stakeholder risk management and cross-functional team delivery. By mastering these methodologies, I can lead internal training sessions upon my return, ensuring that our entire team adopts more efficient sprint planning and avoids costly project delays. The estimated total expenditure is approximately $1,250, which includes the $650 early-bird registration fee, round-trip train travel, and two nights of accommodation. Given the direct relevance to our strategic roadmap, I believe this investment will yield substantial productivity gains for our team. I have attached the full conference agenda and itemized budget for your review. Thank you for considering my request, and I look forward to discussing this with you. Sincerely, Rachel Goldstein

Word count: 173 / Target: 150–200 words

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You would like to attend a three-day professional project management conference in Toronto next month, and you need your company to sponsor your attendance and travel expenses. Write an email to your department manager.

  • • Explain why you want to attend this specific conference.
  • • Describe how your attendance will benefit your team and current projects.
  • • Provide an estimate of the expenses and request approval for sponsorship.
Task 1: Email CLB 10 180 words Complaint

Seminar Equipment Complaint

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Dear Seminar Organizing Committee, I am sending this email to express my disappointment regarding the professional development seminar titled 'Advanced Project Management Strategies' which I attended at your downtown conference center on October 5th from 9:00 AM to 4:00 PM. While the speaker was highly knowledgeable, the learning experience was severely compromised by extremely poor audio-visual equipment. Most importantly, the microphone was constantly cutting out, producing a loud static noise that made it nearly impossible to hear the presenter's case studies. Secondly, the projector was out of focus, and the slides were washed out, rendering the project diagrams completely illegible from my seat in the middle row. Given that I paid $250.00 to attend this seminar for career advancement, I feel the quality of the technical facilities fell far below acceptable standards. To resolve this matter, I kindly request a partial refund of my registration fee, or alternatively, a complimentary pass to a future seminar of equal value with guaranteed working equipment. Thank you for your attention to this feedback. I look forward to your prompt response. Sincerely, Priya Sharma

Word count: 180 / Target: 150–200 words

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You recently attended a professional development seminar where the audio/visual equipment was extremely poor, making it hard to follow. Write an email to the seminar organizers.

  • • Describe the seminar you attended (date, time, and topic).
  • • Explain the exact issues with the audio/visual equipment and how they affected your learning.
  • • Suggest what the organizers should do to resolve this issue or compensate you.
Task 1: Email CLB 10 171 words Complaint

Garbage Collection Missed Complaint

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Dear Waste Management Services, I am reaching out to report a serious service interruption regarding residential curbside collection at 742 Evergreen Crescent. Both our scheduled household garbage and recycling pickups were completely missed on two consecutive Tuesdays, October 7th and October 14th. Despite placing our standard city-issued bins at the curb before 7:00 AM in compliance with local bylaws, collection trucks bypassed our entire street. With two weeks of uncollected domestic waste accumulating in warm weather, our bins are now overflowing. This has created foul odors throughout the cul-de-sac and attracted pests, including raccoons and wasps, posing a clear health hazard for neighborhood children walking to nearby elementary schools. I kindly request an immediate expedited pickup for our block within the next twenty-four hours to clear the accumulated refuse. Furthermore, please provide written confirmation that regular Tuesday route schedules will resume without further disruptions. I appreciate your attention to this urgent public health matter. I can be contacted by phone at 306-555-0122 or by replying to this email. Sincerely, Hassan Mahmoud

Word count: 171 / Target: 150–200 words

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Your municipal waste and recycling collection has been missed for two consecutive weeks, causing unpleasant odors and attracting pests. Write an email to the City Waste Management Department.

  • • Provide your address and details of the missed collection dates.
  • • Explain the sanitary and safety problems this situation is causing.
  • • Request immediate pickup and confirmation of future scheduled service.
Task 1: Email CLB 10 170 words Request

Apartment Lease Renewal Inquiry

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Dear Property Management Team, I am sending this email regarding the upcoming lease expiration for Unit 402 at Westview Terraces, which concludes on December 31st. I have thoroughly enjoyed living in the building and would very much like to renew my tenancy for another twelve-month term. Before finalizing the renewal agreement, however, I would appreciate your assistance in addressing two persistent maintenance issues. Most importantly, the master bathroom radiator has developed a noticeable valve leak, which drips continuously when the heating engages. Secondly, the kitchen window lock is misaligned, preventing the sash from sealing completely and creating cold drafts during windy evenings. Having maintenance technicians inspect and repair both items would give me peace of mind heading into the winter. Could you also please clarify whether there will be any permitted rent adjustment for the forthcoming lease term, and advise me on the timeline for signing the formal paperwork? Thank you for your responsive management and continued support throughout my tenancy. I look forward to your reply. Sincerely, Rachel Goldstein

Word count: 170 / Target: 150–200 words

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Your annual residential lease is expiring in two months, and you would like to renew it for another year, but you need certain repairs completed and wish to clarify new terms. Write an email to your property management company.

  • • State your intention to renew the lease and provide your unit details.
  • • Describe two specific maintenance issues that need repair before renewal.
  • • Ask about any anticipated rent adjustments and the renewal signing timeline.
Task 1: Email CLB 10 186 words Complaint

Restaurant Celebration Complaint

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Dear Restaurant Manager, I am reaching out to express my deep disappointment with the meal my family had at your restaurant on Friday, 12 September, when we gathered to celebrate my parents' thirtieth wedding anniversary. We had booked the table three weeks in advance and chosen your venue specifically for its excellent reputation. Regrettably, the evening did not meet that reputation. Although we arrived on time, we were left standing near the entrance for nearly forty minutes. When we were finally seated beside the kitchen door, the noise made conversation almost impossible. Two of the starters arrived with the wrong dishes, and our main courses reached the table lukewarm, while the vegetables were visibly overcooked. Our server never checked whether we were satisfied, and the anniversary dessert we had pre-ordered was forgotten entirely. This was an important family occasion, and the experience left us embarrassed and deeply dissatisfied. I therefore request a formal apology and a refund of the service charge, together with a written explanation of how you will prevent similar failures. I would appreciate a response within ten business days. Yours sincerely, Mateo Alvarez

Word count: 186 / Target: 150–200 words

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You recently ate at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, but the service and food were terrible. Write an email to the restaurant manager.

  • • Explain what the special occasion was.
  • • Describe the problems you experienced with the food and service.
  • • State what action you expect the manager to take.
Task 1: Email CLB 10 176 words Complaint

Defective Laptop Replacement Request

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Dear Store Manager, I am emailing to formally request a replacement or complete refund for a defective laptop purchased at your downtown store on October 11th. The item is an Apex Pro 15-inch laptop (Receipt #TR-88402, Serial #AP-90231), for which I paid $1,699.99. Although the computer operated normally for the first two days, severe hardware defects emerged shortly thereafter. While running standard office applications, the cooling fans run continuously at maximum speed, and the underside becomes excessively hot. More critically, the laptop shuts down abruptly without warning every three to four hours. As an independent financial auditor working remotely, these unexpected crashes have caused me to lose unsaved analysis and interrupted critical client video presentations. Given that this unit is defective out of the box and well within your company's 30-day exchange window, I request an immediate replacement with a brand-new, factory-sealed unit, or alternatively, a full reimbursement to my credit card. I have enclosed copies of the original receipt and purchase warranty for your verification. I look forward to your prompt assistance. Sincerely, Daniel Okafor

Word count: 176 / Target: 150–200 words

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You recently purchased a premium laptop for remote work from an electronics retailer, but it began overheating and randomly shutting down within the first week of use. Write an email to the store manager.

  • • Provide the purchase details (date, receipt number, and model).
  • • Describe the hardware defects and explain how they disrupt your work.
  • • Request an immediate replacement or full refund under the return policy.
Task 1: Email CLB 10 194 words Request

Block Party Request

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Dear Mr. Henderson, I am contacting you to you on behalf of the Willow Creek Residents Association regarding our plan to organize an annual Neighborhood Spring Cleanup and Picnic. We are hoping to hold this community event on Saturday, May 20th, from 10:00 AM to 3:00 PM. The main goal of this event is to encourage local residents to work together to clean up our neighborhood park and foster a stronger sense of community spirit. Following the morning cleanup activities, we plan to host a small potluck picnic for all volunteers and participating families. To ensure the event runs smoothly, we would like to formally request permission to utilize the community center’s courtyard and parking lot. Additionally, we would be very grateful if the center could provide access to outdoor tables, chairs, and extra trash bins, as well as permission to use the indoor restroom facilities during event hours. We believe this initiative will greatly benefit our neighborhood and showcase the center's vital role in supporting local residents. Please let me know if we can meet briefly next week to discuss this proposal further. Thank you for your time and consideration. Sincerely, Chloe Martin

Word count: 194 / Target: 150–200 words

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You are planning a neighborhood block party or community cleanup event. Write an email to your local community center manager to request permission and support for the event.

  • • Explain the purpose and details of the community event.
  • • Request specific equipment or facilities from the community center.
  • • Suggest how residents and the center can work together to make it successful.
Task 1: Email CLB 10 169 words Request

Lost Item on Bus

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Dear Lost and Found Department, I am getting in touch with you to report an item I accidentally left behind on one of your buses yesterday, October 12th. I was traveling on Route 41 heading downtown at approximately 4:30 PM and boarded the bus at 5th Avenue. I disembarked at Central Station, leaving my black leather backpack under my seat. The bag is a medium-sized black leather Herschel backpack with silver zippers. Inside the main compartment, there is a silver 13-inch laptop, a blue spiral notebook, and a small brown leather wallet containing my identification and credit cards. The front pocket holds a set of house keys attached to a red keychain. This laptop contains crucial work files, so I would be extremely grateful for your assistance in locating my belongings. If the backpack has been turned in, please contact me immediately by phone at 555-0192 or reply directly to this email address. Thank you very much for your time, effort, and help regarding this matter. Sincerely, Rachel Goldstein

Word count: 169 / Target: 150–200 words

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You lost a personal item on a public transit bus yesterday. Write an email to the public transit lost and found department.

  • • Describe the lost item and its contents in detail.
  • • Provide the details of your trip, including the route number, date, and time.
  • • Explain how you can be contacted if the item is recovered.
Task 1: Email CLB 10 168 words Opinion

Park Replacement Opinion

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Dear Editor, I am getting in touch in response to the article published on April 10th regarding the city's proposal to replace Oakridge Park with a new commercial retail center. As a long-time resident of this neighborhood, I was deeply concerned to read about this potential change. While I understand the municipality's goal to boost economic growth, destroying Oakridge Park would severely diminish our community's quality of life. This park is one of the few remaining green spaces in our area where families, seniors, and children can exercise and socialize outdoors. Converting this land into shopping units would inevitably increase traffic congestion, noise pollution, and environmental degradation. Instead of developing our park, I strongly suggest that the city council consider redeveloping the abandoned industrial area on 5th Avenue. Utilizing that location would revitalize an underused part of town without sacrificing vital green space. I hope you will publish this letter to encourage broader community discussion on this important issue before a final decision is made. Sincerely, Alex Morgan

Word count: 168 / Target: 150–200 words

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You recently read an article in your local newspaper about a proposal to replace a neighborhood park with a commercial center. Write an email to the newspaper editor to share your opinion.

  • • Mention the specific news article you read and your initial reaction.
  • • Explain your concerns regarding the proposed commercial development.
  • • Suggest a practical alternative for the community to consider.
Task 1: Email CLB 10 179 words Complaint

High Utility Bill Dispute

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Dear Billing Department, I am getting in touch to formally dispute my latest monthly electricity statement (Account #8921-4501) for the billing cycle of October 1st to October 31st. The current invoice indicates a total charge of $485.50, which is more than triple my average monthly payment of approximately $130.00. Upon reviewing the detailed usage breakdown, I noticed an extreme spike in energy consumption reported during the second week of October. However, my family was out of town on vacation during that entire week, and all major appliances were unplugged or turned off. There were no changes in our daily routine or household setup that could justify such a massive increase in power usage. I kindly request that you re-examine my account for billing errors and send a technician to inspect the meter at my residence for technical malfunctions. Additionally, please place a temporary hold on the disputed balance so no late fees are applied while this issue is being investigated. I appreciate your prompt response regarding this matter. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Sincerely, Chloe Martin

Word count: 179 / Target: 150–200 words

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You recently received a monthly utility bill that is significantly higher than expected. Write an email to the billing department to dispute the charge.

  • • Provide specific details about the bill and the unexpected charge.
  • • Explain why you believe the bill is incorrect.
  • • State what action you expect the company to take to resolve the issue.
Task 1: Email CLB 10 169 words Opinion

City Development Opinion

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Dear Editor, I am getting in touch with you in response to your recent article published on April 10th regarding the city council's proposal to rezone the community park on Elm Street for commercial development. As a resident of this neighborhood for over eight years, I read the news report with great interest and concern. While I understand the council's intention to boost the local economy, converting our main green space into a retail complex would severely diminish the recreational areas available for local families. Furthermore, the increased vehicle traffic would create serious safety risks for children who play nearby and worsen daily congestion on residential streets. I encourage your news team to publish a follow-up story that highlights the perspectives of local residents and explores alternative sites for commercial zoning. Featuring an online poll or a public opinion section in your next issue would also help ensure our community's voice is heard by city officials. Thank you for your continued coverage of key local issues. Sincerely, Samantha Reed

Word count: 169 / Target: 150–200 words

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You recently read an article in your local newspaper about a proposed city development project. Write an email to the editor expressing your views on the news.

  • • Mention the specific news article and topic you are responding to.
  • • Explain how this news impacts you and your local community.
  • • Suggest what additional details or follow-up coverage the newspaper should provide.
Task 1: Email CLB 10 188 words Complaint

Construction Noise Complaint

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Subject: Noise Complaint – Early Morning Construction at 123 Maple Street Dear Noise Control Department, I am contacting you to report excessive noise from a construction site located at 123 Maple Street. The work begins promptly at 6:00 a.m. on weekdays and continues until approximately 9:30 a.m., producing loud hammering, heavy machinery engines, and frequent backup alarms. This early‑morning activity has been ongoing for the past three weeks. The noise severely disrupts my household. As a remote worker, I rely on a quiet environment for video conferences and focused tasks, but the constant din forces me to wear noise‑cancelling headphones for hours, which causes headaches and fatigue. My two young children also struggle to sleep past 6:30 a.m., leading to irritability and reduced performance at school. I respectfully request that the department investigate whether the site is complying with the municipal noise bylaw, which limits construction noise before 7:00 a.m. If a violation is confirmed, please enforce the permitted start time and provide me with a written update on the steps taken within ten business days. Thank you for looking into this matter. Sincerely, Samantha Reed 403-555-0187 [email protected]

Word count: 188 / Target: 150–200 words

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You have been experiencing excessive noise from a nearby construction site that begins at 6:00 a.m. on weekdays, disrupting your sleep and work‑from‑home schedule. Write an email to the City Noise Control Department reporting the problem. In your email, be sure to: • Describe the specific noise issue, including times and duration. • Explain how the noise affects you and your household. • Request a specific action or follow‑up from the department.

  • • Describe the specific noise issue, including the times it occurs and how long it lasts.
  • • Explain the impact of the noise on your daily routine and well‑being.
  • • Request a concrete action or follow‑up from the Noise Control Department.
Task 1: Email CLB 10 164 words Request

Birthday Venue Request

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Subject: Birthday Party Venue Booking for October 25 Dear Bright Moments Events Team, I am emailing to arrange a facility for my daughter's eighth birthday celebration on Saturday, October 25, from 2:00 p.m. to 5:00 p.m. We expect around twenty children aged seven to nine, along with about ten parents. Could you please tell me which party packages suit a group of this size? I would like details of the services you provide, such as catering, decorations, entertainment, and staff supervision, together with the full pricing and any extra weekend charges. Information about parking and wheelchair access would also help our family plan the day. Finally, I would like to schedule an appointment to visit and tour the facility next week, ideally on Tuesday or Thursday afternoon, before I confirm the booking. Please let me know which times are available and whether I should bring anything to the visit. Thank you for your assistance. I look forward to your reply. Sincerely, Emily Nguyen 514-555-0117

Word count: 164 / Target: 150–200 words

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You are planning your child's eighth birthday celebration for Saturday, October 25, from 2:00 p.m. to 5:00 p.m. About twenty children and ten parents are expected. Write an email to Bright Moments Event Planning to arrange a facility for the party. In your email, be sure to: • Describe the occasion, the number of guests, and the date and time. • Inquire about the available services and the pricing and costs. • Schedule an appointment to visit and tour the facility.

  • • Describe the birthday occasion, the expected guests, and the date and time of the event.
  • • Inquire about the available party services and the full pricing and costs.
  • • Schedule an appointment to visit and tour the facility before confirming the booking.
Task 1: Email CLB 10 167 words Complaint

Faulty Rental Bicycles

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Subject: Request for Full Refund – Faulty Bicycle Rentals on July 12 Dear Manager, On Saturday, July 12, my family rented four adult bicycles from Seaside Cycle Rentals for a full-day coastal ride costing $180. Unfortunately, every bicycle was faulty and unusable. Two bikes had flat tires, one had a slipping chain that would not stay in gear, and the fourth had brakes so worn that it was unsafe to ride. Your staff promised replacements but, after a forty-minute wait, admitted that no working bicycles were available. By then the morning was lost, and our only full day in Victoria was ruined, since the coastal ride was the highlight our two children had expected for weeks. We had to cancel our picnic reservations and spend the afternoon searching for another rental shop. Given that we received no usable service at all, I request a full refund of $180 to my original payment method. Please confirm your decision in writing within ten business days. Sincerely, Daniel Okafor 905-555-0164

Word count: 167 / Target: 150–200 words

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While on holiday in Victoria last weekend, you and your family rented four bicycles from Seaside Cycle Rentals for a full-day coastal ride. However, all of the bicycles were faulty and unusable. Write an email to the shop manager explaining the issue. In your email, be sure to: • Describe the rental arrangement and the specific faults you found. • Explain how the faulty bicycles affected your family's holiday plans. • Request a full refund and a written response within a clear timeframe.

  • • Describe the bicycle rental, including the date, the number of bicycles, and each fault found.
  • • Explain the impact of the faulty bicycles on your family's holiday.
  • • Request a full refund and ask for a written reply within ten business days.

How CELPIP Writing Is Scored

Trained raters evaluate Task 1 and Task 2 on four equally weighted dimensions. You do not need perfect grammar to reach CLB 9, but you do need clear organization, precise vocabulary, and complete task coverage.

Content & Coherence

Address every bullet point in a logical order. A missing Task 1 requirement can cap an otherwise strong response.

Vocabulary

Choose precise nouns and verbs, natural collocations, and Canadian spelling. Avoid repeated generic words such as good, bad, and thing.

Readability

Use clear paragraph breaks, varied sentence length, and accurate linking words. Long unbroken paragraphs reduce readability.

Task Fulfillment

Stay within 150–200 words, keep one consistent tone, and answer the exact prompt rather than a memorized topic.

Four score killers

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  1. 01 Missing one of the three Task 1 bullet points.
  2. 02 Mixing formal and informal register in one email.
  3. 03 Writing under 150 words or padding far past 200.
  4. 04 Using a memorized answer that ignores the actual prompt.

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How many words should a CELPIP Writing response be? add

Both CELPIP Writing tasks require 150 to 200 words. Aim for roughly 160 to 190 words so you have time to proofread. Responses under 150 words usually lack enough detail, while responses well over 200 words increase the chance of grammar slips and running out of time.

What is the difference between CELPIP Writing Task 1 and Task 2? add

Task 1 asks you to write an email addressing three bullet points in about 27 minutes. Task 2 asks you to choose between two survey options and defend your choice in about 26 minutes. Both tasks are scored on the same four performance dimensions.

How is CELPIP Writing scored? add

CELPIP Writing is evaluated on four equally weighted dimensions: Content and Coherence, Vocabulary, Readability, and Task Fulfillment. Raters check whether you covered every requirement, used precise and natural language, organized clear paragraphs, and stayed within the expected word count and tone.

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Yes, a template is useful as a paragraph structure, not as a script to memorize. Adapt the template to the exact prompt, audience, and requirements. A response that only fills in blanks often sounds generic and can score lower on vocabulary and task fulfillment.

Should my CELPIP Task 1 email be formal or informal? add

Match the register to the audience. Use a formal tone for a manager, company, landlord, or city official. Use a friendly, semi-formal tone for a neighbour, colleague, or friend. Keep the tone consistent from the greeting through the sign-off.

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